Talk:Subterranean Jungle

No Sources

AllMusic is a commercial site and it not in any way reliable nor independent. It's inclusion is just spam, not a verification. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.149.137.77 (talk) 21:13, 19 July 2008 (UTC)

Orphaned references in Subterranean Jungle

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Subterranean Jungle's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "allmusic":

• From Joey Ramone: Huey, Steve. Joey Ramone at AllMusic. Retrieved July 27, 2011.
• From End of the Century: Erlewine, Stephen Thomas. "End of the Century — The Ramones". Allmusic. Retrieved Feb 9, 2014.
• From Pleasant Dreams: Erlewine, Stephen Thomas. "Pleasant Dreams – The Ramones | Songs, Reviews, Credits, Awards | AllMusic". AllMusic. Retrieved 2014-02-23.
• From Punk rock: Raggett, Ned. "The Faith/Void Split LP". Allmusic. Retrieved 2012-08-16.
• From Marky Ramone: Ankeny, Jason. "Marky Ramone: Biography". AllMusic. Retrieved 27 July 2012.
• From Rocket to Russia: Erlewine, Stephen Thomas. "Rocket to Russia - The Ramones | Songs, Reviews, Credits, Awards | AllMusic". AllMusic. Retrieved 2014-02-08.
• From Soul music: About Soul, Allmusic.com. Retrieved 11 July 2013
• From Ramones (album): Erlewine, Stephen Thomas. "Ramones | Songs, Reviews, Credits, Awards | AllMusic. AllMusic. Retrieved 2010-05-15.
• From Leave Home: Erlewine, Stephen Thomas. "Leave Home - The Ramones | Songs, Reviews, Credits, Awards | AllMusic Guide". AllMusic. Retrieved 2014-01-26.
• From Rocket to Russia (The Queers album): allmusic ((( Rocket to Russia > Overview )))
• From Ritchie Cordell: Biography by Steve Kurutz at Allmusic.com. Retrieved 27 February 2013

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT⚡ 19:39, 9 March 2014 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Subterranean Jungle/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Вик Ретлхед (talk · contribs) 09:49, 7 June 2014 (UTC)

Beginning the review. Glad to be working with a great friend of mine again.

Lead

• "The album begin with two cover songs"→begins (third person singular)

•  Done

• addiction of alcohol→alcohol addiction

•  Done

• The cn template should be dealt with.

•  Fixed

• "spawned"→released, to be more "encyclopedic" in the intro

•  Done

Conception

• album art→artwork

•  Done

• recording process→recording (process adds nothing)

•  Done

Compositions and lyrics

• would later be covered by rock band Green Day→suggest writing this in past simple ("was covered") and omitting Green Day's genre (they are punk rock as far as I know)

• I changed it to The album's third track, "Outsider," was written by Dee Dee and in 2002, it was covered by Green Day on Shenanigans.

• delink music journalist

•  Done

• "—The song"→perhaps ";" would fit better the purpose? (with small "t" of course)

•  Done

• fan-base→fanbase

• I put fandom instead, since I believe it is more encyclopedic as it has its own entry.

• be consistent with the quote marks per WP:MOSLQ

• Can you point out specific examples of this? I could not find any myself but I may be overlooking them.

Nothing serious. It can stay the way it is.

Release and reception

• Robert Christgau said→wrote, since the column appeared in The Village Voice

•  Done

• The following personnel can be verified with AllMusic→Credits are adapted from Allmusic

•  Done

Personnel

• The following credits have are adapted from AllMusic→Credits are adapted from Allmusic

•  Fixed

OK, review is done, I'm happy to pass the article. I smell another good topic here.--Retrohead (talk) 20:01, 8 June 2014 (UTC)