Talk:Social profiling

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Hey, this is Cookiestan with your peer review.

• I thoroughly appreciate your formatting of the article and how organized your article looks.
• Also great job of incorporating links to specific words in your article.
• I also see a good number of credible sources.

Examples of suggested edits:

• Suggested edits for lead section: "voluntarily shared public social data", and replacing tunnels with channels, replace these with this, delete "existing and"
• Second section: replace "these" with this, and add s to social network to make it "social networks"
• Third section: add "amount of" after "increasing"
• Your article is very easy to read and easy to understand while having an encyclopedic tone.
• Your tools of social profiling section is extremely fascinating and it would be great to see you add more tools pertaining to social profiling.
• In your marketing and social profiling section, it would be more impactful if you could find statistics and examples of various big companies like Facebook and Snapchat that shows how social profiling has changed their marketing game. A possible suggestion that you can try out is adding a graph with the numbers changing over time. Cookiestan (talk) 07:56, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): RayBall. Peer reviewers: Cookiestan, Classybluepower.

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): RayBall.

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Peer Review by Classybluepower

Hi there, this is Classybluepower with a peer review of your draft!

Your article is off to a very good start. The topic of social profiling is a difficult concept to understand, and I like how the structure of your article is clear, organized and coherent. The sections and content that you have presented help to give more insight to what social profiling is and the aspects that are related to it. I would suggest that you continue to add more paragraphs and information to areas that seem underdeveloped, such as the "Social Media Profiling" section and the "Market and Social Profiling" section. Also, perhaps include the consequences of social profiling into your article. Since you discuss how there are many ways in which one's social profile can be constructed and revealed to the public, maybe talk about how this raises privacy concerns and issues. Furthermore, I do like your section "Tools for Social Profiling" because it is well-written and the topic itself is quite interesting. Try to add on to this section with some more information that you find later, and also try to approach other sections with a similar sense of clarity that you have established here. Additionally, make sure to proofread your article and edits before you publish them! I did find a couple of incomplete sentences and spelling errors here and there, so try to be on the careful lookout for those in the future. Overall, keep up the good work! Classybluepower (talk) 09:17, 14 April 2017 (UTC)