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Could this article be written any more poorly? A "drop dead"? And Ames is not mentioned before the last line of the long first portion. Fail. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.178.146.58 (talk) 20:40, 22 February 2014 (UTC)
The "CIA Career..." paragraph contains the two subsequent sentences
She eventually moved on to becoming deputy chief of external operations in Africa.
and
She was eventually brought into a CIA operation in Bonn.
Which "She" does it refer to? I believe the first refers to Vertefeuille, but I am not sure. In either case, it is ambiguous which "She" is meant and I assume both sentences mean a different one. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 188.96.211.250 (talk) 00:09, 18 January 2015 (UTC)
- Dear IP editor, I am working on the corrections to the article. Also, I have a photograph of Grimes to illustrate the article. It will be a process of many months. Geraldshields11 (talk) 15:42, 25 July 2016 (UTC)