Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics

Latest comment: 7 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
Good articleSaint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starSaint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics is part of the Saint Kitts and Nevis at the Olympics series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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Current status: Good article

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Saint Kitts and Nevis at the 2000 Summer Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

Will be reviewing this article as part of a GAN sweep. Comments will appear soon. MWright96 (talk) 19:16, 23 October 2017 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • Wikilink Kim Collins and Velma Bass in the lead

Background

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  • "Saint Kitts and Nevis made its Olympic debut in 1996 sending ten athletes." - better: Saint Kitts and Nevis made their first appearance at the Olympics in 1996, sending ten athletes
  • " Velma Bass previously competed at the 1996 Summer Olympics in the women's 4 × 100 meters relay." - change to partook for variety

Athletics

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  • "This was the second Olympic appearance for both Collins and Bass, both" - comma inbetween the words "Bass" and "both" needs to be replaced with a semi colon
  • "Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter." - Collins competed in both the 100 meter and 200 meter dashes
  • "Collins finished fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, failing to advance to the finals." - Collins placed fifth in the semifinals for the 200 meter event, and thus failed to advance to the finals.
  • "and eighth in the semi finals for the 200 meter." - 200 meter sprint

Good work on this so far. You're on the right track for on getting this series of articles into a Good Topic. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 20:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)Reply