Talk:Ryan Condal

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Erik in topic References to use

Requested move 11 January 2022 edit

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: Moved back to the prior title.  — Amakuru (talk) 11:14, 20 January 2022 (UTC)Reply


Ryan J. CondalRyan Condal – Inappropriate move by Joeyconnick to add in the initial. Ryan Condal is named without the initial in many reliable sources, including articles in Variety, Deadline Hollywood, and The Hollywood Reporter, the main three sources that most frequently name him due to his involvement with the entertainment industry. As a result, it violates WP:COMMONNAME in not being concise enough. "Ryan Condal" is sufficient, and there are no other Ryan Condals to be confused with. Erik (talk | contrib) (ping me) 23:10, 11 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

References to use edit

Thanks, Erik (talk | contrib) (ping me) 19:20, 28 October 2022 (UTC)Reply

10 October 2022 update edit

Here, I updated the article with two new references. In the process, I also restored the previous layout.

  • The "Early life and education" was too short of a section per WP:OVERSECTION and lacked inline citations, giving the impression that the section was unreferenced
  • The "Career" section is a bland titling and had five paragraphs that amounted to a wall of text without any subsections available
  • The "Filmography" section should not be titled as such because a filmography is a list of films (unfortunately a common bad practice on Wikipedia), where "Credits" is suitable. Furthermore, per MOS:TABLECAPTION, the credits table needs a caption

Thanks, Erik (talk | contrib) (ping me) 13:48, 10 October 2022 (UTC)Reply