Talk:Rufus Stokes

Latest comment: 4 years ago by EdJF in topic Poorly written

Date of death discrepancy

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Both findagrave entries list dateofdeath as June 1, but neither include a marker, so I have left the existing unsourced date untouched. Dru of Id (talk) 05:47, 24 September 2011 (UTC)Reply

Poorly written

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Among other issues with this article is the lack of an effective transition between the section "Early life" and "Accomplishments" which starts off "He later created a smaller domestic version..." Seems that something is missing, i.e., what did he create previously?EdJF (talk) 19:13, 29 January 2020 (UTC)Reply