Talk:Paolo Burali d'Arezzo

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Vicedomino in topic Lead paragraph

Angel de Saavedra edit

The WorldCat does not list any book by this author for the year 1888, and the older editions do not have a page 11. Where did this come from? Can someone provide a valid reference?

Vicedomino (talk) 06:04, 4 October 2015 (UTC)Reply

Lead paragraph edit

The lead paragraph has been rewritten. With respect, there were two references to Catholic belief in the lead paragraph, which are matters of opinion and not fact. They constitute POV when cumulated, as they were. They are appropriate in the Catholic Encyclopedia, but not in the Wikipedia. Normally, the name of the subject of the article is expected to be the same as the title of the page. In addition, major stages in Burali's life were omitted from the original lead, in favor of his after-life. There is already a subsection on his Beatification, and it is listed in the Infobox. Nothing is being omitted or overlooked, but overkill needs to be guarded against. --Vicedomino --Vicedomino (talk) 05:28, 3 April 2016 (UTC)Reply