Talk:Orgasm Inc.

Latest comment: 10 years ago by A.amitkumar in topic Screenings

Screenings edit

I watched this on Netflix; should I add that?

Seriously, how much utility is there to including this lengthy list of screenings?--NapoliRoma (talk) 16:05, 9 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I WP:BRD reverted this edit because the screening section is not notable and should be removed per WP:NOTDIRECTORY. We do not need to keep a list of all screenings (some at small local theatres, colleges or non-notable film festivals) in addition to the 'Release' section where the most important screenings are covered in prose. Even if it could be referenced, which I doubt, it would give WP:UNDUE weight as the section takes up about four pages in the printed version compared to two pages for the rest of the content. jonkerz ♠talk 19:58, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Reply
I agree on your points above. I would just add that it was my edit to reverse your edit. The reason was not clear for the removal of content at that point. Also small/minor pictures or movies when screened in certain locations actually makes it notable to add and is a part of making the picture worth reading about. May be a line that the movie has been screened in non commercial locations might help. Either way i am fine. Amit (talk) 22:09, 4 June 2013 (UTC)Reply

Opening content edit

There seems to be a lot of content (i.e. an entire summary of the film) in the opening paragraphs. Surely some of this should be moved down into a "Summary" section? Also, I just watched the film earlier today, and parts of the description I found here do not accord in any way with how I understood the film. For example;

"Her employer is developing what they hope will be the first Viagra drug for women that wins FDA approval to treat a new disease: female sexual dysfunction (FSD). Many women suffer from this, as males suffers erectile dysfunctions. However, women's issues with this sexual matter has been seen to be not as important as their partner."

I don't remember anything from the documentary that compared the perceived importance of ED and FSD. In fact, most of the film attacked the very concept of FSD as being faulty.