Talk:Oregon (Awake)

Latest comment: 11 years ago by TBrandley in topic GA Review
Good articleOregon (Awake) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 30, 2012Good article nomineeListed
July 22, 2012Peer reviewReviewed
Current status: Good article

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: TRLIJC19 (talk · contribs) 22:29, 30 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

  Doing.... TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:29, 30 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
  • Any other picture for infobox? That is not very clear at all; barely visible; and it serves no purpose to the article; therefore failing the non-free use criteria. Get a new clearer pic and expand rationale, or delete.
    •   Done
  • Plot is very long; and condense to maybe three paragraphs.
    •   Done. Mainly
  • Last sentence of ratings is unreferenced.
    •   Done
  • The note about running time is unnecessary.
    •   Not done. That's why there is an option. Also used on other GAs on the Awake subject.
  • In the lead, don't link episode IMO.
    •   Done
  • Why is the international broadcast info only mentioned in the lead? Per WP:LEAD, everything in the lead should be mentioned in the article. Perhaps under production?
    •   Not done. It is in the Ratings area. No guideline has been violated.
  • Fix the dablinks.
    •   Done

Overall, good job; on hold. TRLIJC19 (talk) 22:44, 30 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review. I have fixed issues, and think it is ready for GA. TBrandley 23:46, 30 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
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