Talk:Nilam Sawhney

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Ian (Wiki Ed) in topic Feedback

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@Akhan22: This looks good, but I would shorten the section headers. So rather than "Chief Secretary, Government of Andhra Pradesh (2019 - Present)", I'd just go with something like "Chief Secretary of Andhra Pradesh" or "Government of Andhra Pradesh".

When it comes to section headers, use sentence capitalisation, not title capitalisation. So "Child development and mothers' welfare" rather than "Child Development And Mothers` Welfare", unless of course that's the actual title of a position. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:59, 22 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

Hi Ian (Wiki Ed), thank you for your insightful comments and feedback :)