Talk:New York City housing shortage

Latest comment: 10 months ago by Jim.henderson in topic Busing

Split edit

@Bluerasberry: just wanted to let you know I split out this section. Thanks again! Seahawk01 (talk) 03:09, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Seahawk01: Yes this seems better. The split is from Affordable housing by country/ Affordable housing. Blue Rasberry (talk) 11:16, 13 November 2018 (UTC)Reply

Lead edit

I have added a new lead since the previous one was deleted. The information is not that comprehensive and could even be subject to further expansion and modifications. I am just hoping to contribute to the improvement of the article's quality by setting the tone and also help with the notability issue by providing some sources. If you have questions, please send me a message. Thanks. Darwin Naz (talk) 22:40, 10 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

I have changed the first sentence of the lead (New York City, like many other large cities, has been affected by a shortage of affordable housing.). It sounds like it is making an argument or a thesis statement. The new sentence is a mere description. Also, the first sentence of the Wikipedia articles often begins with the subject, which in this case is the "New York City housing shortage". Feel free to improve on it or you can message me if you have questions. Darwin Naz (talk) 13:50, 12 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

Page takes a highly POV position on the causes, nature, and existence of this "crisis." Maybe it's just a tight housing market on top of a national failure to create opportunity for our poorest families. More elaboration of this POV problem available at the recent AfDE.M.Gregory (talk)

PROMO edit

Page reads like a press release for policy proposals by Mayor DeBlasio. Tone needs to become be NPOV and encyclopedia.E.M.Gregory (talk) 15:53, 18 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Presentism edit

There was an actual housing crisis during WWII and teh years immediately following. Article needs to be limited by date, and the dates of this "crisis" need to be reliable sourced.

Opposite, I think, would be more useful. Rather than focus only on what a shortage is and how many times it has happened, or narrow it further to a particular date range, better to widen the scope to make it history of New York City housing. Which would be a shorter title, too. Jim.henderson (talk) 01:13, 29 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

Title edit

New York City housing shortage would be a more objective title.E.M.Gregory (talk) 15:53, 18 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Notability edit

I don't think I looked hard enough at this piece of political propaganda when it was at AfD. Topic is sourced to a single article on the real estate website Curbed, a single article in the New York Times, and Scott Stringer. okay, there are a couple of reports by city agencies, a "rorum" held by a local college, and "Why Billionaires Don't Pay Property Taxes in New York" from CityLab. Seriously folks, whether or not your "beleive" in this crisis (as someone said in that messy AfD,) pages need WP:RS adequate to establish notability.E.M.Gregory (talk) 16:14, 18 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Busing edit

In the news we hear of immigrants being bused in from Texas, and difficulties in finding places for them. Has it made a difference to housing in the city? Jim.henderson (talk) 23:31, 5 June 2023 (UTC)Reply