Talk:Nasreen Paracha

Latest comment: 3 years ago by DarkGlow in topic GA Review

GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Nasreen Paracha/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:26, 22 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Basic stuff and comments edit

  • Non-free use rationale on the image is in great condition.  
  • "awarded awarded" → "awarded"
  • Add parts from every section to the lead to summarize the article.
  • The storylines section looks good.
  • As with other articles, recite references after every quote per WP:REF.
  • Try to reduce the use of quotes in #Development.
  • I couldn't find any actual issues at #Reception, but adding reviews from critics of her character would be nice.
  • Overall, remove quotes and expand the entire article, as it only has 8 references at the moment.
  • Archive all sources (either manually or with this tool).
  • The reference after "2020 RTS Yorkshire Awards" should not be linking to highlighted text.

Progress edit

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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