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Improvements
editI believe that this article could be improved by addressing the following:
- expand the text to discuss the subject's life in more detail, including: early life, early service, expand the Battle of Dunkirk section (what unit was he commanding?);
- add in line citations.
Just a couple of ideas. When this article is ready for re-assessment, please add it to the list at WP:MHA. — AustralianRupert (talk) 06:15, 28 May 2009 (UTC)
Dunkirk
editConsidering the BEF was made up of British regular and TA divisions, no Indian Army formations; what battalion did this "British Indian Army" office command and do we have a source that supports him taking part in the campaign?--EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 01:40, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
Sources
editshould be cited in a correct way, or at least to be identifiable. "London Gazette-original citation" is clearly quite a fanciful formatting, but hardly identifiable and certainly not verifiable reference, because when there's not given a hint as to the date, issue and page where the "original citation" is to be found, it does not refer to the source of information. Therefore I removed the claim.--78.128.176.131 (talk) 23:59, 4 April 2011 (UTC)
2 pages
editwhy there's 2 pages containing this person? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akbar_Khan_(Pakistani_general) Ahendra (talk) 13:43, 8 June 2020 (UTC)