Talk:Mr. Monk and the Man Who Shot Santa Claus

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Gabriel Yuji in topic GA Review

Title

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The onscreen title is "Mr. Monk and the Man Who Shot Santa Claus". Is it worth at least adding "Claus" to the title of the page? And, either way, could someone explain the "and" in the title; surely a comma would be more appropriate--TimothyJacobson (talk) 14:00, 16 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

I switched it to add "Claus." As far as the "and" goes, it probably shouldn't be there, as Monk IS the man who shot Santa Claus, but the official title uses the word "and," with no comma.Kevinbrogers (talk) 20:35, 21 November 2009 (UTC)Reply

Plot Point

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Should something in the article be added to explain the old lady who gets killed. It isn't very clear in the episode as to why, or what she may have seen. --TimothyJacobson (talk) 14:00, 16 March 2009 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 14:27, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'll review. I've moved the nom from Magazines and print journalism to Television, not sure why it was miscategorized. -- Zanimum (talk) 14:27, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Passing "Production".

Passing "Reception". I've reworded the sentence about David Bianculli's recommendation best "of the day" followed up by the names of two epic episodes, it sounded like "of the era". Feel free to reword further, but make sure it's clear that it's best of the airdate.

Passing "External links". -- Zanimum (talk) 15:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Passing images, lead, "Plot", references, categories.

I guess that's it. Pass as GA! -- Zanimum (talk) 17:06, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for the review, and, yeah, I agree with your changes. Thanks for doing them. Gabriel Yuji (talk) 17:40, 22 March 2014 (UTC)Reply