Talk:Mister Monday

Confusing

Having never read the book, I find the plot summary very confusing. It should be rewritten to be more objective. Perhaps describe the overarching plot of the book, rather then a play by play. 108.202.194.109 (talk) 15:33, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

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we should have the canadien book cover it's way nicer and it would show a bit more difrence in covers —Preceding unsigned comment added by Jamhaw (talk • contribs)

I think some information on the Sleepy Plague, should be added since it's important to the plot and since the article doesn't mention why Arthur entered the House in the first place.

--CmaccompH89 04:54, 23 August 2006 (UTC)

No, the literary significant edition is the 1st and that is what should be included as part of the infobox. :: Kevinalewis : ^{(Talk Page)}/_(Desk) 14:38, 19 December 2006 (UTC)

solution

The solution to the main problem of the story is never mentioned. Some detail should be spent describing the Nightsweeper. --CmaccompH89 17:41, 15 April 2007 (UTC)

As far as I can tell, very little about what happens after Arthur enters the house has been included at all. Could someone put it in? Strdst grl (talk) 16:19, 13 February 2008 (UTC)

Assessment comment

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Well, I quite agree with the Night Sweeper. I thought that was very clever of Dusk. But, my question is: what did anyone think of the book? I loved it - to be quite frank. I thought the article was quite good, but it tends to focus mostly on the beginning and none on the Night Sweeper, forgive me if I'm mistaken. I also beleive, this is a wonderful story to have children read. It opens their imaginations and is very charming without any vulgar comments. I've added in more about the Nightsweeper. Might not be enough, but I hope it is! 86.134.108.135 (talk) 01:13, 17 November 2010 (UTC)

Last edited at 01:13, 17 November 2010 (UTC). Substituted at 00:13, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Edits

I just made a major overhaul to the plot summary, but forgot to put an edit summary down, so here it is: Redistributed the details of the plot summary to better represent the story, as well as several spelling errors. A Dozenalist (talk) 19:57, 17 September 2024 (UTC)