Talk:Milan Puskar Health Right

Latest comment: 6 years ago by InternetArchiveBot in topic External links modified (January 2018)

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Per WP:LEAD, the lead should summarize the article and highlight notability. The fact that 4,000 patients use the free clinics a year is notable. The quote from Sarah Einstein is not. Yoninah (talk) 17:11, 22 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

I went ahead and edited the lead and the article. Yoninah (talk) 22:42, 25 May 2014 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the edits. - - MrBill3 (talk) 13:48, 27 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

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It is not clear from the article how many clinics are involved. There's a main one in Morgantown, and how many clinics elsewhere? Also, the article should state the size of the staff. BTW, the clinics website states that it accommodates 28,000 patient hours, not 22,000. Yoninah (talk) 22:25, 25 May 2014 (UTC)Reply

I will try and clarify the main clinic and two satellites (I thinks that's what it is) using the organization's website for reference. I can't really find a reliable source for total staff, it gets confusing trying to sort out volunteers and paid staff. I'll see if maybe some of the documentation for the IRS makes it clear, I think that only covers officers though. I was going with secondary sources for as much information as possible that's why I used the 22,000 figure. Thanks for the contributions and feedback. - - MrBill3 (talk) 13:54, 27 May 2014 (UTC)Reply
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