Page seems editorialized and needs sources and NPOV edit

I am a new editor and don't feel fully up to the task of fixing all the issues with this article. It reads like a story rather than an article and there are no in-text citations. I was going to fix some basic grammar and organization but I believe the other issues should be solved first. How can I go about drawing attention to this article? RDvor (talk) 07:55, 29 December 2021 (UTC)Reply