Talk:Marion Hammer

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Michaelwallace22 in topic Neutrality of wording in Harassment Section

Notability concerns addressed edit

I looked around and found that there have been many articles written about Hammer by reliable independent sources. I picked the best of these as references for the most basic facts about Hammer's career, avoiding (I hope) all of the puffery that filled the previous versions of this article.

If someone else agrees that this material addresses the concern over Hammer's notabiliity, I hope that person will consider removing the notabiliity tag. 71.197.166.72 (talk) 06:33, 27 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

I added it in March. Because of your additions, I've now removed it. Felsic2 (talk) 21:03, 27 July 2016 (UTC)Reply

Inaccurate biography? edit

SkippG has removed large amounts of material. I'm opening this discussion so that they can seek consensus for their proposed changes.- MrX 🖋 18:39, 24 January 2019 (UTC)Reply

Neutrality of wording in Harassment Section edit

This section appears to be a bit out of date, and the first paragraph assumes that her claims of harassment are accurate and uses wording calling her a "target" and treating her fear of physical violence as well-founded without explanation to back that up. In my opinion, the section needs to be expanded or reworded to be more clearly neutral.

Section 2.3 also seems to have some neutrality issues and could be organized much better. Michaelwallace22 (talk) 23:38, 25 May 2022 (UTC)Reply