Talk:Malta at the 2018 Winter Olympics
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:42, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for taking it on. Courcelles (talk) 02:02, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- No problem.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:48, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- Ref 7 should be archived too, since the site is closing down.
- Done, I had added that ref later Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- Maybe add some of the results to the lead?
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- "Malta qualified one female athlete, Élise Pellegrin. Pellegrin was 26 years old at the time of the Peyongchang Games." Merge these two sentences.
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- "1 minute and 5 seconds" I think the numbers should be written out, but I'm not sure if MOS:NUMERAL applies here though.
- Done. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- "was better for her." Change to "was much better."
- ^Done. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
Should be it for a short article.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:48, 21 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Nova Crystallis:, short, but there's only so much one can say about a limited subject such as this! Thanks for the review, I've adressed everything you mentioned. Courcelles (talk) 05:06, 21 April 2018 (UTC)