Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

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  This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 January 2019 and 25 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Zara.and. Peer reviewers: Ccroninv ucb.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 00:18, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

Chris's Peer Review

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Hello, looking through your draft I see a lot of promise for your article. The content is interesting and I like how you set up the subsections ahead of time. Since this is an early draft I can only suggest getting a lead section going. I think the organization is there, but even having a sentence or two for a lead gives a good indication of where the article is going. Best luck with the rest of the article.

Johnny's Peer Review

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Hello Zara great job on organization of your entire entry. It's a good idea to get all your sections organized and then start your article. Obviously these are only the beginning stages so the content is short but that's to be expected. Good job so farad solid sources as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Johnny Merkley (talkcontribs) 17:16, 7 April 2019 (UTC)Reply