Talk:Loose Loot

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Dstreb in topic Composition problems

Composition problems edit

Second paragraph of plot and other paragraphs have syntax and composition problems and need to be rewritten Dstreb (talk) 00:49, 5 July 2021 (UTC) Agree, second paragraph is illegible and should be reworked — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.228.88.164 (talk) 00:25, 6 October 2021 (UTC)Reply