Talk:Loggerhead sea turtle policies of the Barack Obama administration (2009–2017)

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Article concerns

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I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. I cannot make the lead paragraph match the title of this article. Nowhere is the Barack Obama Adminstration mentioned. Is it relevant? Is there some unwritten suggestion that there was no turtle protection prior to Obama, or that there's none after it? If date period is important, perhaps you could focus more on a chronological approach to statements. The article title mentions policies, but I can find no policies in the article - just rulings and reports of actions. I suggest you rethink what the article title is suggesting and how it matches the content. It would be good to see evidence of how the media report these so-called policies. Media interest always helps assert WP:NOTABILITY.

Thanks. Nick Moyes (talk) 23:34, 14 July 2017 (UTC)