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  This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Genderrights. Peer reviewers: Adily1.

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I thought you were very objective and had some great, well-researched information in your page. I think you should consider using a table chart for the filmography section instead of listing each film in bullet points because it tend reads a bit more clearly and is a nice visual touch. I would also consider splitting the life section into "early life" and then "career". The first paragraph could go under "early life" and then the following paragraphs would be in the latter. You may also want to create a separate category for the awards Bouzid has won or been nominated for or make it an additional category in the filmography chart.

Adily1 (talk) 13:12, 26 February 2018 (UTC)Reply