Talk:Jack Cole (choreographer)
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editAs it stands right now, this sounds more like a gushing tribute to Cole rather than a balanced assessment. At the very least, it needs the language toned down a bit.
"If not for Cole, it is unlikely Gwen Verdon would have gone on to achieve fame as a dancer; without his instruction, many now-immortal stage and screen actresses probably would not be remembered as dancers today" That is almost directly quoting the work cited, and is the opinion of the author, not a provable fact. C'mon!2604:6000:6D43:1C00:296F:6493:85A:CC73 (talk) 02:44, 19 June 2017 (UTC)