Talk:Impact of self-driving cars

Latest comment: 3 months ago by Sawerchessread in topic introductory section needs more inline citations
Google Self-Driving Car

introductory section needs more inline citations edit

Honestly, just that. its clearly summarizing claims below, but should really be inline regardles. homo momo (talk) 16:28, 12 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

The lede should summarise what's in the rest of the article, so it is not usually required to cite things in the lede assuming they're cited later. WP:LEAD says As a general rule of thumb, a lead section should contain no more than four well-composed paragraphs and be carefully sourced as appropriate, although it is common for citations to appear in the body and not the lead. ColinFine (talk) 22:14, 13 February 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've tried to keep the 4 paragraphs rule, but also shortened it somewhat. I also did some amount of work trying to clean up some of the sections below, and keeping a more neutral tone around the public health section. homo momo (talk) 03:14, 14 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

crash reduction is its own debate edit

I think some groups have argued that crashes haven't gone down as much with current self-driving cars, which has initiated a debate around how much crashes really will go down. May be worth trying to capture that debate rather than trying to quote the most optimistic estimates. homo momo (talk) 16:35, 12 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

Yeah, more I read this, less it gives off encyclopedic tone. Much of it is more an essay extolling the virtues of AVs especially the introductory section. homo momo (talk) 20:49, 13 February 2024 (UTC)Reply