Talk:Hurricane Max (2017)

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Latest comment: 2 years ago4 comments3 people in discussion

Try to reduce, explain, or wikilink (or some combination thereof) the meteo jargon. No links or context for SSHWS, ridge, tropical wave, vorticity, gyre (you pipe-linked ocean gyre here, but that's entirely different to the sort of gyre you're discussing), convection, eye.
Copyedit for clarity and flow, paying special attention to redundancies and dangling modifiers and other things that should have been caught before publishing ("Over 1,500 homes were damaged by [...] damage", "One death [...] declared missing".
- Done Destroyeraa (Alternate account) 00:44, 2 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
One stubby paragraph of met. history seems skimpy for a modern NHC system. By the same token, I'd recommend seeking out more sources of impact info. As it stands, you have just two citations that aren't to the US government. – Juliancolton | ^Talk 19:40, 5 May 2018 (UTC)Reply
Use el Universal for Spanish sources (it's what I used for MX storms back when I edited in the EPAC). YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:55, 5 May 2018 (UTC)Reply
- Doing. Destroyeraa (Alternate account) 00:44, 2 November 2021 (UTC)Reply