Talk:Hurricane Daisy (1962)

Merge

Non-notable storm, minimal info. This is getting irritating. Merge -- §Hurricane ERIC§ archive -- my dropsonde 04:27, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

Merging sounds good. Hurricanehink 01:21, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

Against Merge added more infomation. Storm05 16:07, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

You added very little. The death toll was 5, not 24. The damage total, when inflated, is $62 million, nowhere near the total you gave. The storm is still not notable enough for its own article. Why not add the impact section to the season summary??? Hurricanehink 16:15, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

Did you read the link, it says the hurricane killed 24 people Storm05 17:13, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

That is not an official source. You need to go to NOAA for official sources. NOAA's list of deadliest cyclones is an excellent source, but it only lists cyclones that had or may have had at least 25 deaths. Daisy is not in there. — jdorje (talk) 18:27, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

Also if you add information, you need to add the reference inline to the article. Otherwise how are people supposed to know where the info came from? You can't expect someone to read through all of the external links to find the one place that says the storm caused 24 rather than 5 deaths. — jdorje (talk) 18:27, 8 February 2006 (UTC)

Todo

There is minimal notable information. More impact is needed. Jdorje 23:10, 19 January 2006 (UTC)

Ok, now that the article is new and rewriten, what more is needed for B? Juliancolton (talk) 00:32, 10 January 2008 (UTC)

I'd like to see some more sources, as its coverage on Canada is lacking. "Although total damage estimates are univaliable, it is estimated that damages could surpass $10 million (1962 USD) dollars" - That makes no sense. Although I know it's from the preliminary report, damage reports likely have been released in the 45 years since then. This is why some more research is needed. Typos need to be fixed, and the overall writing is mediocre. It's a decent start, however. --♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:34, 10 January 2008 (UTC)

Ok, typos are fixed, I improved the writing somewhat, and I added a little more impact. Juliancolton (talk) 15:16, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

Alright, my other comments still need to be addressed. --♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:07, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

Yea, I am still looking for canada info. Juliancolton (talk) 16:15, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

To be honest, I can't find any info other than the preliminary report. Also, I believe it is up to B class standards. Juliancolton (talk) 18:10, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

There is plenty more information in the sources you have used. --♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 18:26, 12 January 2008 (UTC)

Rainfall image added. Thegreatdr (talk) 16:41, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

Thanks you, it really helps the article. Juliancolton (talk) 16:59, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Hurricane Daisy was the worst flooding in New England since Hurricane Diane in 1955. " to ""Hurricane Daisy brought the New England since Hurricane Diane in 1955" YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Television Infrared Observation Satellite (TIROS) revealed the presence of a tropical disturbance east of the Leeward Islands on September 28.[1]" stick an "A" before here. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• "A nor'easter offshore the East Coast of the United States caused Daisy to curve northward on October 5." no need for "shore". YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• " The remnants of Daisy re-emerged into the Atlantic" Atlantic what? Ocean? I'm saying this because you mention Atlantic Canada earlier. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• "As a result of the formation of the tropical depression on September 30, the Leeward Islands were put under hurricane watches and gale warnings." to "Upon becoming a tropical cyclone, hurricane watches and gale warnings for the the Leeward Islands." YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• "A total of 7.71 inches (196 mm) of precipitation fell in Portland, Maine within 24 hours, 3.13 inches (80 mm) of it in only 6 hours. As a result, this was the highest 24 hour rainfall total for Portland, which stood until Hurricane Bob in 1991.[7]" should IMO be changed to "A total of 7.71 inches (196 mm) of precipitation fell in Portland, Maine within 24 hours, 3.13 inches (80 mm) of which fell in only 6 hours. Subsequently, Hurricane Daisy set a then-record the highest 24 hour rainfall total for Portland; however, this recorded was broken during Hurricane Bob in 1991.[7]" YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• The writing is getting choppy here. "Also, lobster fishing ships suffered from heavy losses due to Daisy.[2] Boat damages were severe, with hundreds of small boats destroyed, and many larger boats damaged.[9] " should IMO be revised to "Damages to boats were severe; hundreds of small boats were destroyedwhile many larger boats were damaged.[9] In addition, the lobster industry suffered heavy losses from the system. " YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)
• "Also, a pier was washed away in the high surf.[4] Total damage from wave and tide was $600,000.[9] " "Also" should be revised to "In addition," IMO. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• " for 4 days in " spell out 4. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Houses with roof shingles blown off were common in Massachusetts.[9]" to "Throughout Massachusetts, many roofs were blown off of houses." YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• " causing 16,000 CAD in damage." USD? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 23:15, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Eh, it's only $14,866 USD according to this--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

• Ok, I have addressed/fixed all of your issues.--12george1 (talk) 23:44, 5 March 2013 (UTC)

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