Talk:Human trafficking in North Korea

Not in North Korea

Most of this article deals with human trafficking etc outside of North Korea. Either the title should be changed or the content should be deleted.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:26, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

References

This article largely relies on one source from 2010.--Jack Upland (talk) 00:28, 18 March 2018 (UTC)

Unreliable source

This article is overwhelmingly sourced from a single US Department of State report, with entire sections where that is the only source. The US State Department is a propaganda outlet and therefore not a reliable source esp. on matter relating to a country the US is politically antagonistic towards. This source should be removed, and any article content sourced from the document should be corroborated by reliable sources or otherwise removed. 82.33.72.42 (talk) 09:29, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

Editing Wikipedia Assignment

Hi! I am a college student looking to edit a Wikipedia article of my choice. I am very interested in the political, social, and economic forces driving the human trafficking of North Koreans and I would like to improve this piece. For more information, please visit my User Page, as I have posted more details about my plans and also sources I have chosen to edit this article. (Evelyn4712 (talk) 01:41, 15 September 2023 (UTC))

Wiki Education assignment: Poverty, Justice, and Human Capabilities

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2023 and 23 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Evelyn4712 (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by DStrassmann (talk) 19:22, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

Writing "Human Trafficking of North Korean Women in China"

 Courtesy link: User:Evelyn4712/sandbox

Hello everyone. I am planning to create a new article that specifically addresses the trafficking of North Korean Women in China. This parent article does not focus on the Chinese nation as the main perpetrator of these human rights violations, so I believe a separate article will do justice to the issue. I have written a detailed proposal for the new article in my page's sandbox for you all to checkout! Please note that my sources are a work in progress, so there will be more when I publish the article. Thank you! (Evelyn4712 (talk) 04:08, 1 October 2023 (UTC))

Added wikilink. Mathglot (talk) 20:04, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Article Review

Great article! I liked how well you formatted your sentences and the inclusion of the banner. I also appreciate the amount of links you embedded, allowing people to continue reading information stated in your article. I do suggest expanding the number of sources you have, as it can better support the topic and add various perspectives to an important issue. Another thing you could look into is the name of the subtopics under "Trafficking by type", just to make the idea of each paragraph clearer and united in a way. Wonderful job! Can't wait to see the finalized piece. Ctrlxem (talk) 05:22, 24 October 2023 (UTC)