Talk:Herman Wedel Jarlsberg

Rewriting the Career section edit

1. It is lacking, it does not discuss his attempts at conspiring with Swedish officals to coup Norway in 1808-1810. Neither is his work as chief of supply in the provisional government (Regjeringskommisjonen) mentioned.

2. It lacks sources for some of the claims about scholars' opinions of him.

3. Un-enyclopedic prose

(This is my first suggestion in a talk page, but I read that I should mention stuff like this here, before I go too bold)

--Lazergaz