Talk:HMS Merope (1808)

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Auntieruth55 in topic assessment

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this suffers from the same problems as your articles on the brig-sloops. Too much jargon, the text does not flow and sometimes seems out of context, and many of the pronouns (she did this and she did that) are unclear, especially when there are two different "shes" in the same sentence. auntieruth (talk) 23:43, 12 December 2013 (UTC)Reply