Talk:Guilt Trip (song)

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Yashthepunisher in topic GA Review

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@Zmbro: You may want to split the lead into two paragraphs. Also, I have expanded the live performances section; take a look and see if you need to edit it anymore. --Kyle Peake (talk) 21:56, 20 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

Kyle Peake Yeah I stated that in the edit I made here. I'll figure it out. Thanks for expanding it. – zmbro (talk) 01:22, 21 June 2019 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Guilt Trip (song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Yashthepunisher (talk · contribs) 14:18, 19 July 2019 (UTC)Reply


I will be reviewing this article. Yashthepunisher (talk) 14:18, 19 July 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • Why did Kid Cudi expressed negative opinions about his feature? Mention it in the lead.
  • Period missing from alt text.
  • Link S1 and Yeezus in the 'Background and development' section.
  • Delink Yeezus in the later section.
  • "The song received generally positive reviews from music critics, with the melodic sound garnering praise." Any reference to support this claim?
  • Why Cudi is mentioned with his full name multiple times?
  • Mainly because it's his stage name. With West, it's his actual name so it applies to use surname only but because Kid Cudi is Scott Mescudi's stage name I think you'd have to say it everytime. I had this discussion with Kyle Peake during the GA review of "Father Stretch My Hands"
  • Link Complex in the 'Release and reception' section.
  • Delink United States in the 'Commercial performance' section. Per WP:OLINK.
  • "In December 2013, West delivered a live performance." Replace 'West' with 'he'.
  • Archive the links.
  • Yeah I tried to do that last month but the bot refused to work for me. Finally did :-)
  • Are HotNewHipHop and Popdust RS's?

That's it. Great work on the article Zmbro. Yashthepunisher (talk) 12:21, 20 July 2019 (UTC)Reply

Yashthepunisher All done. Comments above. Thanks so much for taking this! :-) – zmbro (talk) 15:03, 20 July 2019 (UTC)Reply

It's a pass.   Yashthepunisher (talk) 15:08, 20 July 2019 (UTC)Reply