Talk:Gaetano Thiene
Latest comment: 2 years ago by JoJo Anthrax in topic Lots of problems here
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Lots of problems here
editI have begun to edit some of the problematic content on this page, but there is a LOT more to do. Much of the grammar is poor, and much of the content is WP:PUFFERY and WP:PROMO. If discussion is needed, let's have it here. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 15:30, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
- @JoJo Anthrax: Thanks for your comment. Could you please show me an example of how to make it better in the article? Luca boscolo (talk) 09:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
- As a "paid" editor you are expected to know how Wikipedia works, why would anyone employ you if you didn't? We are all unpaid volunteers here and have better things to do than help you earn your pay. Theroadislong (talk) 10:13, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
Much of the WP:PUFFERY, WP:OR, and WP:SYNTH has now been removed from this article. I daresay that more can be done. I have put this page on my watchlist. JoJo Anthrax (talk) 16:01, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
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editI have received money to write this article. Luca boscolo (talk) 09:36, 6 November 2022 (UTC)