Talk:European Network for the Investigation of Gender Incongruence

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Nylandvj in topic Evaluation/Suggestions

Evaluation/Suggestions edit

I think this article is a great start on the topic of the European Network for the Investigation of Gender Incongruence. Including every clinic contributing to the study helps readers understand the reach of the study. The wording of the existing article is objective and concise with no subjective/persuasive language. In order to make improvements to this article, I would suggest finding citations that do not require payment to access. Most of the citations linking to explanations of the study being conducted require payment to access which could be frustrating for readers trying to access quick information about the study. I would also suggest explaining the aim of the study in a more in-depth way. Few people understand the process of medical transition for transgender people so explaining the basics in the article could be very beneficial. Overall, this is a great start! Nylandvj (talk) 04:33, 19 March 2021 (UTC)Reply