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Untitled edit
This article's use of English grammar could be improved. If no one minds I will make a couple of minor edits. Richard Sidler 02:49, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
I would like to add this as a lead in: Eduardo Henrique Accioly Campos (10 August 1965 – 13 August 2014) was a Brazilian political leader and economist who died in an aircraft accident in the Brazilian city of Santos on 13 August 2014, three days after his 49th birthday. [4] At the time of his death Mr. Campos was the leader of the Brazilian Socialist Party – Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB), and a presidential candidate in Brazilian General Election. [1] Campos announced his candidacy In April, naming Marina Silva as his running mate. Richard Sidler 04:07, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
Mention of Grandfather's exile in lede edit
There is a confusing sentence in the lede about Campos' grandfather returning from exile. The comma is either misplaced, or indicates there is more to the statement. And there is no mention of this information in the body of the article. The sentence should either be improved, and cited information be added to the article, or it should be pulled. Jusdafax 12:18, 14 August 2014 (UTC)
Expert Needed edit
The section on Politics is minimal, and some sections lack citations. Challenger l (talk) 00:39, 18 August 2014 (UTC)