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Clarify?

Post war modernisation proposals were limited by the tight war emergency design which offered inadequate space and weight for the fire control and magazines for four or five 3-inch twin 70 turrets combined with the fact the heavy-to-handle 5.25-inch shells[2] fitted when the cruisers were built had a large burst shock which made them a more effective high level AA weapon than post war RN 4.5-inch guns

Sentence is a bit long, and appears to combine two contradictory ideas: a) postwar retrofits were limited by tight design (bad) b) 5.25 were more effective high altitude weapon (sounds good)

not sure where the "twin 70" fits into the mix Feldercarb (talk) 15:27, 29 October 2021 (UTC)

In context, I believe "twin 70" refers to twin-mounted 3"/70 Mark 26 guns in 4 or 5 turrets. Twin 3"/70 guns were considered better than the underpowered 20mm Oerlikons for stopping Japanese aircraft, and with a higher probability of kill (mostly due to higher rate of fire) than the 5"/38 single guns on most DDs and DEs in the Pacific theatre.

But yes, I agree, that sentence it very unwieldy, and severely lacking in commas, at the very least.  — sbb (talk) 20:39, 29 October 2021 (UTC)