Talk:David Segal (politician)

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David does it right.

There is also a David Segal at the Washington Post, who wrote an article about notability on Wikipedia. Jason McHuff 06:42, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Several problems with this article

Poorly referenced, reads like a campaign ad; not encyclopedic. Needs a photo. The keeper of French yarn #7, Carbon Fiber division _{blah, blah, blah}^{Let there be sites}

Campaign ad?

This article, as I said above, reads like a campaign advertisement. I suggest it be completely rewritten for a chance at sounding encyclopedic. The keeper of French yarn #7, Carbon Fiber division _{blah, blah, blah}^{Let there be sites} —Preceding undated comment added 12:31, 16 May 2010 (UTC).

By all means, feel free to make improvements. I've removed some of the maintenance tags you added since 14 (in addition to multiple inline tags) is excessive and unhelpful.--BelovedFreak 00:06, 17 May 2010 (UTC)

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