Talk:Damon Grant

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Giggy in topic Untitled
Former good article nomineeDamon Grant was a Media and drama good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
June 6, 2008Good article nomineeNot listed

GA Review

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  • It'd probably be better if had an infobox image... even if nonfree, it could be rationalised.
  • Brookside should appear in italics throughout the article.
    • As do other TV shows.
  • The lead could do with some mention of his reception, etc... it's not quite broad yet.
  • "One of the first of the shows many teenage characters to capture the viewing public's imagination,[5][6] the role saw O'Brien catapulted to fame as a teen heart throb,[7][8][9] and his adoption of the "mullet" hairstyle proved to be in keeping with the zeitgeist of the times, and saw the character further entrenched as a cultural reference point." - split this one up... lots of ands, hard to read.
  • "and added to both Brookside's fame and notoriety.[17][24][25][26][27][28][29][30]" - do we really need all those refs?

Generally reads OK, an interesting article. Nice work, giggy (:O) 10:29, 6 June 2008 (UTC)Reply


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Failed; author (Hiding) is inactive and there's been no editing for over a week on this article. giggy (:O) 11:12, 14 June 2008 (UTC)Reply