Talk:Criminal (Ra.One song)

Article title

To the few editors working diligently on this article at the moment, I do hope to bring to your attention that there is an error in the title of this page—perhaps the page's intended title should be "Criminal (Ra.One song)". The current title lacks the period between Ra and One. I would have moved the page myself but considering the expansion tag on the top of the page, I didn't want to distract any on going work. EelamStyleZ (talk) 16:30, 7 December 2011 (UTC)

a GA?!!

I am sorry, but WHY is this article nominated for a GA? --Meryam90 (talk) 21:51, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Σ (talk · contribs) 06:46, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

 Doing... →Στc. 06:46, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

My immediate comment is that the article's length is a little short. There is no specific length requirement for GA, but the article must be broad in its coverage.

Lead

Looks OK, although it needs a copyedit and rectification of some MOS problems. See WP:MOSMUSIC.

Release

Looks fine, but needs a bit of expansion, copyedit, and MOS compliance.

Critical reception

It reads like an advertisement and needs less direct copy/pastes, more prose.

See also

Looks good.

References

Some of them need cleaning up with more information; publisher, consistent date formats, and the like.

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   In general, the article needs copyediting, less direct quotes, and compliance with WP:MOSMUSIC.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   Is there any available information? About the development of the song, for instance?

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

   Critical reception section reads like a advertisement.

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

   Non-free use rationales need immediate attention, and the captions are.... vague, at most.

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   I'm afraid I have to fail this nomination. The article is a good start, but still has many issues that inhibit it from reaching GA. I suggest that you try to bring it up to B-class and have a peer review before another GA nomination, which I hope does succeed. Good luck. →Στc. 07:46, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

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