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Rewrite
editI have tagged this article for a complete rewrite. This needs to achieve two things:
- An encyclopaedic tone.
- All content to be backed up by references.
Unreferenced anecdotes about people saying "fuck" don't cut it in a serious encyclopaedia! --DanielRigal (talk) 21:25, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
- While I'd agree that an exact transcript of the incident is probably unwarranted, I think the crash is worth mentioning as an example of the extreme danger inherent in the gap. As for references, here's the original video of the crash. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=go6z0r82DDA&NR=1 134.84.102.133 (talk) 21:08, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- If it is framed in those terms then I would agree. --DanielRigal (talk) 21:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
References
editThe first of the references seems to be dead. That only leaves one remaining reference. This needs to be improved. Please look for references in reliable sources (not blogs or video hosting sites) and use them to improve the article. --DanielRigal (talk) 21:30, 1 August 2008 (UTC) The only reference is dead, consider finding more articles. Also I believe the last line was never mentioned in the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 99.232.236.138 (talk) 05:56, 22 May 2012 (UTC)