Talk:Cardamom Mountains jar burials

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Izlhyl in topic Peer Review and Categorization

Peer Review

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I just finished peer reviewing your page and I think you've done a great job so far. I think you have a really good lead that introduces the reader to your site in a neutral way. Something that I would suggest adding is more content sections other than the two that you currently have. I thought that your discussion about the influence of trade regarding grave goods was interesting and I think maybe creating a section that separately discusses this topic would be worth considering. I also think that your concluding section is a great idea and I like that you plan to include ongoing research about this site to confirm the idea that more details are still to be found at your site. Keep up the hard work! Ksaldan3 (talk) 23:40, 27 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

Peer Review and Categorization

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Just reviewed your page and it looks very good! A few notes I have is that the "Ongoing archaeological efforts" section requires citations. I have also added categories, however the page may require more (I'd like a second pair of eyes for this before removing the categorization tag). Nice job! --Izlhyl (talk) 20:07, 20 March 2022 (UTC)Reply