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Latest comment: 5 years ago by AndyFielding in topic Huge article really necessary?
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June 19, 2012Good article nomineeListed

Sample edit

Latest comment: 12 years ago2 comments2 people in discussion

Los Aldeanos sample? It's blatantly obvious. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.67.206.248 (talk) 04:48, 16 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Album booklet does not mention anything about that sample. Oz talk 06:57, 16 March 2012 (UTC)Reply

Chor edit

Latest comment: 12 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I'm sure the chor is overtaken from somewhere. But from where? 78.53.194.89 (talk) 05:18, 15 April 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA Review edit

Latest comment: 11 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):  
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):  
    b (citations to reliable sources):  
    c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):  
    b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):  
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  

Overall:
Pass/Fail:  

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Infobox edit

  • Provide an ALT text for the cover.   Done

Lead edit

  • was well received → garnered positive reviews   Done

Background and release edit

  • You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose.   Done
  • Link synth   Done
  • and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing"   Done

Composition edit

  • According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove.   Done
  • and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample.   Done
  • As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics".   Done

Critical reception edit

  • This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol.   Done

Chart performance edit

  • eventually certified → Remove "eventually"   Done

Music video edit

  • No issues.

Live performances and cover versions edit

  • No issues.

Track listing edit

  • I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available.   Done

Credits and personnel edit

  • No issues

Charts and certifications edit

  • The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table.   Done

Release history edit

  • I did a slight c/e of the tables.
  • Could you add a Label column too.   Done

References edit

  • Check for words that are in capitals, they should just be written normally. (FN46)   Done

Summary edit

Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold

Passing, well done :) Aaron • You Da One 13:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

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Huge article really necessary? edit

Latest comment: 5 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Yikes—this is more information about one song than I've ever seen. Is it really necessary? If pages like this one were written for every song, WP would need an extra server farm. I'm just saying. – AndyFielding (talk) 08:18, 6 April 2019 (UTC)Reply

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