Talk:Breathing (Jason Derulo song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Infobox

• Provide an ALT text for the cover.  Done

Lead

• was well received → garnered positive reviews  Done

Background and release

• You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose.  Done
• Link synth  Done
• and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing"  Done

Composition

• According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove.  Done
• and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample.  Done
• As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics".  Done

Critical reception

• This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol.  Done

Chart performance

• eventually certified → Remove "eventually"  Done

Music video

• No issues.

Live performances and cover versions

• No issues.

Track listing

• I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available.  Done

Credits and personnel

• No issues

Charts and certifications

• The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table.  Done

Release history

• I did a slight c/e of the tables.
• Could you add a Label column too.  Done

References

• Check for words that are in capitals, they should just be written normally. (FN46)  Done

Summary

Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold

Passing, well done :) Aaron • ^{You Da One} 13:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)