Talk:Bonita Ely

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Umibenokafka in topic Sections?

Sections?

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This informative article needs breaking up into sections to improve its digestibility. MargaretRDonald (talk) 22:14, 11 August 2020 (UTC)Reply

I've started the process of restructuring the article, adding some subheadings to make it easier to digest, but not sure the section headings are quite right yet. I've also added some further information (and references) and removed some text that was copy-pasted from a website (about the Plastikus Progressus work). I think the article still needs some more work, the information about various works needs to be referenced better and could be streamlined. I also have some more information to add about Ely's work on the Women's Arts Register, will add that next. Umibenokafka (talk) 15:15, 9 March 2021 (UTC)Reply