Talk:Blizzard Bash

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Rt318. Peer reviewers: RumbleofThunder, Phu445.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 18:10, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review

Here are a few things that I think could be improved:

• More links to other pages are needed.
• Jargon is being used here. Consider giving definitions in the article, or using links to explain terms. (example: weld and no-weld)
• The article could use more information, as well as sources.
• Consider adding more sections to the article. What else might people want to know about this demolition derby in particular?

Overall though, it's a great start to an article. RumbleofThunder (talk) 22:57, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review 2

Expand/Explain the jargon being used. Go into more details about what a normal demolition derby would consist of. More detail on history maybe, who started it or what company started it? You could do a sponsor section, a notable winners section, and in general just a few more sections to add detail to the page. Phu445 (talk) 15:14, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

Peer REVIEW 3

As people above mentioned, if I'd never been to a demolition derby, I would be completely lost. Jargon should be explained with possible external links attached to it. There needs to be more of an explanation on the governing body of this event. Does this event tie in to any other demolition derbies in the country? Are any of the participants notable? Be creative in the sections and information you add.- eo — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eodhiambo (talk • contribs) 18:04, 7 December 2015 (UTC)