Talk:Belize at the 2004 Summer Olympics

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will review this one shortly. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Lead

• "The delegation consisted of two track and field athletes, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade;" - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Background

• "This made Athens their ninth appearance at a Summer Olympic Games, and they have yet to appear at any Winter Olympic Games." - "although" would be better than "and"
• "Belize sent two track and field athletes to Athens, Michael Aguilar and Emma Wade." - colon instead of comma. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Athletes

• "...time of the Athens Olympics, and had previously represented..." - no need for the comma.
• "...heats of the women's 200 meters, and was drawn into heat five." - no need for the comma.
• "Michael Aguilar was 24 years old at the time of these Olympics, and was making his only Olympic appearance." - no need for the comma.~
• "He was drawn into heat three, and finished the heat in 51.21 seconds, finishing seventh and last in his heat, and he was eliminated." - recommend splitting into two sentences.

Images

• Only photo is a country flag, which is PD. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

References

• Are you going to archive the refs?
• All other refs look good. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

Comments

• Looks pretty good, will place on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:42, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
  • Thanks, Gonzo fan2007 for another review. Everything has been addressed, and the refs have been archived. Courcelles (talk) 20:58, 3 December 2018 (UTC)
    • Awesome, looks good. i fixed a small typo fyi. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:30, 3 December 2018 (UTC)