Talk:Belgium at the 2010 Winter Olympics

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GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Belgium at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 22:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:11, 22 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • "into the Vancouver Olympics," Replace comma with colon.
  • "This was Belgium's first time fielding women in bobsleigh competition." The two women's names should be mentioned here.
  • "54.09 seconds," Remove comma.
  • Mollin is misspelled several times.
    • Watch out for Van den Bogaert's first name and capitalization.
  • There should be something about Mollin's second run.
  • When you record a DNF on run 1, you don't get to make run 2. Courcelles (talk) 14:56, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply
  • Try not repeating the same words for the beginning of each sentence. For example, "Both".
  • Mention something van der Perren's history in the Olympics.
  • "Belgian Olympic and Interfederal Committee" Link in prose needed.
  • "in selecting her for the Games. These were her first Olympic Games" Merge to "in selecting her for her first Olympic games."
  • Which spelling are you going with here, American or British (meter/metre)?
    • Meter, the only metres I see are in the citations, which they should be since they are the titles of the articles Kees08 (Talk)
  • You should try not starting each paragraph with "Gysel".
  • Overlinking to Celski's article.

Mostly minor things. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:55, 24 July 2018 (UTC)Reply