Talk:Ambrose Akinmusire
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editThe opening of the biography section reads a lot like an awkward college newspaper review. I did not read the rest, because I assume it was taken straight from an Ambrose Akinmusire fan-site. Since I know nothing about Ambrose, I left this section alone, I just wanted to note that it really does not seem to adhere to the neutrality policy of biographies. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.100.127.47 (talk) 23:51, 16 April 2011 (UTC)
Upon further review, I propose that the revisions made by the user "laughs2011" be reverted back to their prior state.
http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ambrose_Akinmusire&diff=418887373&oldid=385233418
That link takes you to a comparision to before and after the first change made by laughs2011. Reverting back to the original state will, imo, make the biography section much more neutral, and would also reduce the length substantially. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.100.127.47 (talk) 00:03, 17 April 2011 (UTC)
I think most (all?) of the current biography is directly copied from this text, which is obviously biased: http://www.mariahwilkins.com/akinmusire/bio.html —Preceding unsigned comment added by 129.241.161.44 (talk) 14:21, 3 May 2011 (UTC)
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