Talk:Alfred A. Tomatis

Latest comment: 8 years ago by 2003:4A:AF1A:A300:C1FB:6C38:C811:278F in topic Tomatis in Poland

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I'm going ahead and tagging one specific line in the underlying article as neutrality disputed. The part of the sentence I'd like to bring to everyone's attention is "...and should not be promoted." I'm not sure how not to read that as a command (intentional or unintentional) to the reader about what to do or not do, and regardless of the rest of the statement, violates the WP's neutral point of view policy. By the way, I'm a relatively new editor and this is my first time tagging something, so go easy. Wizardlander (talk) 07:30, 14 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

This article was subject to a ton of COI editing and needs a complete work over. I have been meaning to get to it, but haven't yet. Please feel free to edit this. I'll do what i can to help. Jytdog (talk) 12:12, 14 April 2015 (UTC)Reply

Tomatis in Poland

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In the article, it is claimed that

"Research done in Poland (72 schools; 1333 children) proved that the training improved key school competences (ability to learn; social competences; language competences; music competences."

There is not given any source for this.

If the source would not be given, I will change the article as it was before. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2003:4A:AF1A:A300:C1FB:6C38:C811:278F (talk) 20:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)Reply