Talk:Albany Convention Center

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Comments by WikiCopter:

1. The second sentence in the lead is somewhat awkward, I don't exactly know how to rewrite it. WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:40, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
   • Fixed. upstateNYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
2. In the lead, the phrase "the main draw" (emphasis added) threw me off. Can you replace draw with a synonym (I don't know what it means). WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:45, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
   • Draw → incentive. upstateNYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
   1. The word lead appears also in other sections with the same usage. Can you take care of them too? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:49, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
3. After the seventh paragraph in the History section, there is a comment that states <!-- '''WHEN WAS THE SITE CHOSEN?''' -->. Have you taken care of that? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:56, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
   • Yea, I still have to figure that out. I haven't seen it in the sources yet. upstateNYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
4. The history section is large, can you split it into several subsections? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 02:04, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
   • Added some sub-headings. upstateNYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

Looking good, Upstater! WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 03:41, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

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