 | 2018 Marrakesh ePrix has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: June 27, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:2018 Marrakesh ePrix/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 18:39, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
- I'll grab this one. Courcelles (talk) 18:39, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
- "a further four points behind in second" Don't think we need 'further'.
- "The inaugural in-season rookie test was scheduled to be held at the circuit the day after the ePrix. Teams were permitted six hours of running and were allowed to field two drivers who were not in possession of an e-licence at the time of the test." This likely needs sourcing.
- "advertising hoarding" I don't think "hoarding" is the word you want?
- "third after running over the turn five kerbing and glanced the barrier" Tense change in mid-sentence
- "The race started at 16:00 Western European Time (UTC+0)" Saturday or Sunday?
- "moved to the Drivers' Championship " Missing some words here
- Otherwise this looks good, another solid article. Courcelles (talk) 19:30, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: Thanks again for another review. All the issues have been actioned and I have made my own adjustments. MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
- Promoting. Courcelles (talk) 20:01, 27 June 2018 (UTC)